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Comic 43 - page 12

10th Sep 2013, 11:21 PM in Awakening part 2
page 12
Average Rating: 4.91 (11 votes)
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craybest 10th Sep 2013, 11:21 PM edit delete
craybest
This is what happens when you have a superhero group but no airship. XD
This page was supposed to be easy, but it gave me a lot of trouble. I had to redo it lots of times :P
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anarcha 11th Sep 2013, 12:20 AM edit delete reply
anarcha
Just, thank you , tights trope. And thanks to all comic artists who work with 'tights'.

Oh and I adore this background image.
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 12:26 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Sorry I didn't understand, did I made a mistake with the word tights? English isn't my first language.
or are you glad I drew them with tights? XD
and thanks for the background image comment :)
anarcha 11th Sep 2013, 12:40 AM edit delete reply
anarcha
haha --
'tights' - the tight outfit superhero fashion trope -- you portrayed perfectly, so I'm complimenting your work, meaning, fun!
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 12:46 AM edit delete reply
craybest
XD okay, I just wanted ot be sure I had not made a mistake with the words, hehe.
thanks :D
Notos 11th Sep 2013, 12:29 AM edit delete reply
Notos
Nice suit designs!
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 12:32 AM edit delete reply
craybest
thanks! I changed some of them a bit from the ones that appear on the cover, I like the new ones better:)
Lucid 11th Sep 2013, 1:06 AM edit delete reply
Lucid
I thought it was funny. I enjoyed it. Thanks for taking a look at my page.
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 8:41 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks Lucid, I enjoyed your comic, I liked the overall concept and mood of the page.
Draginbeard 11th Sep 2013, 2:23 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Looks good!

One small anatomy detail, you have captured male out line very well, shoulders wide, narrow hips, but you gave your female the same 'V' cut.

Generally speaking, in an adult female, hips are wider than shoulders. It still looks good how you drew her, but you can give her a more feminine body using that for a guideline.
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 8:42 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks for the tip, I dind't want to give her too wide hips because I tought it would look too exagerated, but I possibly went the other way too much, heh.
I'll have that in consideration for next time.
ranger_brianna_new 11th Sep 2013, 4:56 AM edit delete reply
ranger_brianna_new
Well, with the tights being somewhat typical of the genre, you just knew there was going to be something atypical coming up--in this case, their method of transportation. :P
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 8:43 AM edit delete reply
craybest
hehe, I have been waiting a long time to be able to make this page, I'm glad I finally was able to do it,
Tom 11th Sep 2013, 10:10 AM edit delete reply
I guess nothing motivates start-up heroes as having to use public transport.. made me laugh. Great comic - and hurry up.. i want to see what happens next :)
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 11:06 AM edit delete reply
craybest
There sould (finally) be some action on next page ;)
I'm glad you like the comic!
Real Hero 11th Sep 2013, 1:11 PM edit delete reply
Real Hero
I love the outfits! I can see you made some minor changes from the cover ones, and they definitely all look a bit more individual now. Love the subway idea, some light-hearted fun before a big fight. :)
craybest 11th Sep 2013, 1:13 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks! and yeah, I changed a few minor things for some of the costumes, I'm glad you like them more now too :)
shastab24 11th Sep 2013, 11:04 PM edit delete reply
shastab24
I like the Astonishing X-Men homage. It nicely juxtaposes with the subway panel.
craybest 12th Sep 2013, 3:41 PM edit delete reply
craybest
thank you :)
craybest 9th Oct 2013, 1:13 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Yeah, I guess these heroes don't have a blackbird XD
Boy Phaff 12th Sep 2013, 1:37 PM edit delete reply
Boy Phaff
Looking good.
craybest 12th Sep 2013, 3:42 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks, Boy!
dougwarner59 12th Sep 2013, 3:10 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
This page looks really good. perfect coloring, professional inking and great dialog.

One flaw I see is the left hand on the guy saying "superhero tights" It looks like the thumb is in a strange position. another super minor flaw is the bottom panel (same character and arm) the elbow looks too short, but it is barely noticeable, to the point it's probably wasn't even worth mentioning.
craybest 12th Sep 2013, 3:45 PM edit delete reply
craybest
You're right about the first comment, I'm not too sure about the bottom image though, it looks good to me.
dougwarner59 12th Sep 2013, 5:32 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
your probably right. I was just mentally drawing out his arm in my head and it seemed the bicep was too long or the forearm was too short, but it was probably just an optical illusion on my part. so, just ignore that final comment.
Lady Jean 21st Sep 2013, 8:33 PM edit delete reply
Lady Jean
Woah, Those costumes are great!
I feel the only thing missing is an epic soundtrack to accompany them. :)
craybest 22nd Sep 2013, 12:59 PM edit delete reply
craybest
haha I've always been a fan of the 90's X-men theme and also the X-men evolution main theme ;)
PiGuy 7th Oct 2013, 7:55 AM edit delete reply
You ok? Been kinda quiet around here.
craybest 8th Oct 2013, 3:43 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Hey, I'm trying to finish the new page, I know it has been a lot of time, but I'm doing ok, thanks for asking.
Tibbittz 8th Oct 2013, 3:17 PM edit delete reply
Tibbittz
The art is getting consistently better and better, both the lines and the colors. A very enjoyable read, too; Marvel has forgotten how to make a straight superhero book, so we're lucky you haven't.
craybest 8th Oct 2013, 7:19 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks a lot Tibbitz, I'm glad you think I'm improving.
I'm coloring the new page, I hope to have it ready for today.
cachway 14th Oct 2013, 1:25 AM edit delete reply
cachway
Don't mind us. We're just going to a costume party.
craybest 14th Oct 2013, 10:08 AM edit delete reply
craybest
I could have said there was a Comic Con going on by then in my city. XD
Leonardo 30th May 2014, 2:28 AM edit delete reply
I thought it was funny they ended up on the subway,lol
craybest 30th May 2014, 12:27 PM edit delete reply
craybest
hehe thanks! It was the idea ;)
Th4natos 24th Jul 2014, 8:01 PM edit delete reply
Th4natos
Wow...Awesome page! And lol at them taking the subway.
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