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Comic 40 - Page 09

15th Jul 2013, 2:42 PM in Awakening part 2
Page 09
Average Rating: 5 (8 votes)
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craybest 15th Jul 2013, 2:42 PM edit delete
craybest
I've decided to change update day to monday, it's much easier for me to be able to work on it in the weekend and upload it on mondays, when everything is feeling down XD
Our heroes are getting to important conclusions.
Also, what is this? Character development? LIES!
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Comments:

Draginbeard 15th Jul 2013, 5:19 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
I love that first panel, it is just so clean and the red frame in the background centers things.

I also love Laura's expression in the last panel, as she is trying to gracefully field a compliment.

This page works very well!
craybest 15th Jul 2013, 5:42 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks a lot, Draginbeard!
I'm pretty satisfied with this page, the second panel came out almost exactly as how I pictured it in my mind.
dougwarner59 16th Jul 2013, 10:58 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
score one with the ladies...smooth.

The girls face in the final frame looks amazing.
craybest 17th Jul 2013, 12:49 AM edit delete reply
craybest
haha thanks, I took quite a while to do that face, I'm glad you like it :)
Peter Palmiotti 17th Jul 2013, 11:52 AM edit delete reply
Peter Palmiotti
Great development!
craybest 18th Jul 2013, 3:39 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks, Peter! :D
Lady Jean 18th Jul 2013, 11:40 AM edit delete reply
Lady Jean
I kinda like the idea that powers mess with your head in a literal sense. Excellent panel flow!
craybest 18th Jul 2013, 3:40 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks! More info will be given about their powers and everything ;)
Real Hero 6th Aug 2013, 5:49 PM edit delete reply
Real Hero
Really love this page. :) All the facial expressions looks natural, with subtle hints at emotions. One thing though; it always looks odd to me when you make multiple speech bubble from one person. Have you considered doing the bubble with connecting lines to look smoother?
craybest 7th Aug 2013, 12:01 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks Real Hero! About the multiple bubbles from a single character, it depends.
I use connecting lines only when I want both bubbles to be read one after another.In this page the text bubbles order alternates between the 2 characters, that's why I don't use connecting lines.
Real Hero 7th Aug 2013, 1:02 AM edit delete reply
Real Hero
I see what you're saying, but you can do it with conversations too. Heres an example.In panel 1, see how Barbara's bubble has the line that loops around and finishes after Batman speaks? You can do that multiple times, so the whole of one char's conversation side is connected. Your way works too' I just think this sometimes looks neater.
(http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=hush+comic+page&qs=n&form=QBIR&pq=hush+comic+page&sc=3-15&sp=-1&sk=#view=detail&id=669CD50BD34D09B8C08EA24A7ADB6EA4BAB2685A&selectedIndex=90)
craybest 7th Aug 2013, 1:27 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Ah, you're right, I thought that it might look too confusing, but it looks very clear.
I'll have it in mind next time I have to do it :)
Thanks!
DocSavage 13th Aug 2013, 10:38 AM edit delete reply
What is the update schedule? Monthly?
craybest 13th Aug 2013, 12:19 PM edit delete reply
craybest
It's actually once a week, but I haven't been able to update these last weeks because I was making myself a portfolio for a comic convention in here. I posted a blog on it :)
Anyway now that the convention is over I'll have a new page between today and thursday, so keep on checking the site!
PiGuy 19th Aug 2013, 9:51 AM edit delete reply
Interesting comic. Nice art and concept. But the lack of schedule is hurting you.
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2013, 3:14 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
I like this page a lot. Laura's blushing at the end is wonderfully done.
craybest 8th Oct 2013, 3:43 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks! I'm happy with this page too.
Th4natos 24th Jul 2014, 7:57 PM edit delete reply
Th4natos
Laura looks very nice in that last Panel
craybest 24th Jul 2014, 7:59 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thank you!
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