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Comic 39 - page 08

4th Jul 2013, 11:29 PM in Awakening part 2
page 08
Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)
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craybest 4th Jul 2013, 11:29 PM edit delete
sorry for not uploading anything last week, this page was hard to do because I was never happy with it, and redid it a couple of times.
Our heroes are arguing if they should use their powers to help others or not.
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Centcomm 5th Jul 2013, 12:34 AM edit delete reply
it was worth the wait :D *HUGS*
craybest 5th Jul 2013, 12:48 AM edit delete reply
thanks a lot Centcomm:)
I have to organize myself to always have a spare page in case I can't finish it on time :P
Centcomm 5th Jul 2013, 1:05 AM edit delete reply
I know that feeling >_< I try to have a weeks worth at a time :D
Peter Palmiotti 5th Jul 2013, 12:35 PM edit delete reply
Peter Palmiotti
Looks good to me!
craybest 5th Jul 2013, 12:49 PM edit delete reply
Thanks, I'm still not happy with the second panel, but it'll have to do for now :)
dougwarner59 5th Jul 2013, 2:32 PM edit delete reply
The only thing I see wrong with the second panel is one of the green guys eyes may be too high or low. But it is still a great looking page with excellent dialog.
craybest 5th Jul 2013, 4:46 PM edit delete reply
yeah I screwed up with his eyes, and many other things in that panel, I corrected some of them but there are still more that bug me :(
Draginbeard 5th Jul 2013, 10:56 PM edit delete reply
Page looks pretty good, about the only thing that sticks out is some of the facial shading is a bit heavy. The shadow under most of the characters bottom lip is just a touch too pronounced.

Keep pushing your art, you will only get better for it!

craybest 5th Jul 2013, 11:01 PM edit delete reply
yeah I have to tone down the shading a bit, specially on the faces XD
ranger_brianna_new 5th Jul 2013, 11:11 PM edit delete reply
If the second panel's bothering you, it might be because of their expressions. They all look shocked, yes, but if it's bugging you, it might be because you're thinking they're not shocked enough; it seemed to be something I picked up that could be your issue.
craybest 5th Jul 2013, 11:31 PM edit delete reply
it's not really that they aren't shocked enough, it's more that the panel idea seems dumb to me, all of them standing next to eachother saying "WHAT?" at the same time seems too obvious and somewhat cartoony to me.
Th4natos 24th Jul 2014, 7:52 PM edit delete reply
"We should go and stop them"

*looks a second panel*

Their Expressions made me literally burst out laughing XD. Comics beautiful and hilarious at same time at the same time.
craybest 24th Jul 2014, 7:59 PM edit delete reply
I hate that panel, I think it looks ridiculous D but I'm glad you can look at it with a sense of humor, hehe.
Th4natos 24th Jul 2014, 7:53 PM edit delete reply
*at the same time.*
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