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Comic 34 - Page 03

10th May 2013, 12:04 PM in Awakening part 2
Page 03
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)
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craybest 10th May 2013, 12:04 PM edit delete
craybest
Finally we are back to our heroes!
I've tried playing more with dynamic poses, paying attention to anatomy and a bit more risky with colors, I think I like the result so far :)
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dougwarner59 10th May 2013, 3:09 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
I like the clean look to your comic it doesn't have that sloppy feel that mine does. The perspective shot in frame one was done very well, I need to start doing more of those type of panels.

I also want to comment on the critique that was given to you on your comic at the forum. I disagreed with about everything she said. One thing she did was to use a normal female to compare with your superhero female. comics exaggerate the way things look for affect. I hope she never picks up a Jack Kirby comic, she will find a million flaws; I guess you can call them flaws but to me they made the comic look great.
craybest 10th May 2013, 4:44 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks a lot Dougwarner! I don't think your comic looks sloppy at all, I think they're just different styles.
About the critique, don't worry I take critiques with a grain of salt, I know comics many times exagerate features, proportions or stuff like that to get the work done, but it's also true that in order to exaggerate something you must first know how it really is, even for comics, because if not then you get stuff like Rob Liefeld, that even though he has great works, others are really really awkward. :)
dougwarner59 10th May 2013, 8:34 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
I guess, but personally I don't care how the artist got to the point he or she is at, as long as I like their work...And I see nothing critically wrong with your work.
craybest 11th May 2013, 3:13 PM edit delete reply
craybest
I do think I had some anatomy problems in last issue, mainly way too long arms, so at least now I'll py more attention to it ;)
Draginbeard 12th May 2013, 2:41 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
You're doing good work here, and its clear you are putting a lot of effort into your pages. In particular, I especially like the hand work in the first panel, that wrist bend is excellent!
craybest 12th May 2013, 3:13 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks a lot Darginbeard, I do put a lot of work into each page, but I enjoy doing them a lot!
Real Hero 13th May 2013, 11:24 AM edit delete reply
Real Hero
Great poses. :) I really like/feel bad for Chris. Hopefully he becomes more comfortable in his own skin. And I wonder, did he start looking this way after he got the powers?
craybest 13th May 2013, 12:26 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks Real Hero! I'm trying to focus a bit more on character interaction and development in this chapter, so don't worry, characters will evolve with time :)
And yeah. he got his looks with his powers, he wasn't always blue skinned ;)
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