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Comic 26 - Page 25

21st Mar 2013, 9:19 PM in Awakening
Page 25
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)
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craybest 21st Mar 2013, 9:19 PM edit delete
craybest
Laura, still in trance, manages to win the fight all on her own, but she is exhausted...
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Comments:

lobotomistman 21st Mar 2013, 9:40 PM edit delete reply
lobotomistman
that guy's coppin a feel hahahaha
craybest 21st Mar 2013, 9:46 PM edit delete reply
craybest
haha I tried to move his hand around, but it looked weird, for balance reasons I think that hand is needed in there XD
Centcomm 21st Mar 2013, 10:05 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
I agree its just plain hard to catch someone and not put your hand in a good place.
craybest 21st Mar 2013, 10:11 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Now that I think of it, I should have put his hand under her legs, not her butt.
As always genius ideas strike me when the page is done XD
Centcomm 21st Mar 2013, 10:12 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
legs would work too .. think of this as the "inital catch" before she settles *winks*
dougwarner59 22nd Mar 2013, 5:32 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
It took me a few looks to figure out what was going on. I was confused about the second panel I thought it was the girl, but by your comments, I am guessing it was ole one eye being sent flying throught the air.
craybest 22nd Mar 2013, 6:01 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Oh, I thought It was clear it was the bad guy being trapped in a bubble and thrown away, I'll have to make sure for future pages that there is no confusion.
Thanks for the critique :)
AlpineBob 13th Jul 2013, 9:14 PM edit delete reply
Yes, it was clear. First panel, bluish energy coalesces around the villain. Next panel, the same energy sends the villain flying. The flow is fine.
craybest 14th Jul 2013, 5:27 AM edit delete reply
craybest
heh thanks, I thought it was clear too, but it's important to know if others can understand it too.
dougwarner59 22nd Mar 2013, 6:09 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
It could be just me. But, maybe you should have him saying something like, "You Bitch!" or "how can that girl possess so much power?"
craybest 22nd Mar 2013, 7:12 PM edit delete reply
craybest
I originally thought of him saying something like "&%$&%&%$" but I thought he was too far away from the "camera" to be able to hear it. Maybe I'll edit it and use it anyway later.
Draginbeard 23rd Mar 2013, 11:12 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
I like the color work here. I didn't have any trouble following the set up from the previous page, it carried over just fine when she used her powers in this page.
craybest 23rd Mar 2013, 3:54 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks! Let's hope the restof the people got it right too.
The first panel ended up a bit bland, I wanted it to be more shocking, I'll have to keep practicing :)
Justin 23rd May 2015, 11:47 PM edit delete reply
I liked your line about the frog catching the princess. Nicely done.
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