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Comic 16 - page 15

7th Dec 2012, 12:16 AM in Awakening
page 15
Average Rating: 4.8 (5 votes)
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craybest 7th Dec 2012, 12:16 AM edit delete
craybest
it seems like nobody knows the origin of their powers... will they be able to find it out?
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Draginbeard 7th Dec 2012, 12:32 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Nice page here, story has me looking forward to how this is going to go!

I like the steel plating in the background, the angle of the plating makes me think they are in some kind of ship.
craybest 7th Dec 2012, 1:01 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks Draginbeard!
The next page will have some explanation on where they are, don't worry ;)
Lady Jean 8th Dec 2012, 1:17 PM edit delete reply
Lady Jean
I like your use of foreground and back ground to give variety to a dialoge heavy page. Can't wait to see what happens next!
craybest 8th Dec 2012, 5:37 PM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks a lot Lady Snafu! It was somewhat of a problem I had, how to make a page with mainly just dialogue to seem interesting visually, I'm glad you think it managed to do it :)
dougwarner59 10th Dec 2012, 12:18 AM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
Just got caught back up with the story. I like the way you tell the story; it is not overly complicated but really interesting to read with characters that are believable.
craybest 10th Dec 2012, 12:35 AM edit delete reply
craybest
Thanks, I'm trying to not give too much information about what's happening at once, because I think it might be too confusing or to boring, so I prefer to keep up the suspense and just release it in small parts :)
Steven-Vincent 4th Jan 2016, 6:27 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
This is very intriguing. Reminds me a little bit of Suicide Risk... Only I like your storyline better so far.
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